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    is this good English

    Dear experts,I'd be grateful if you could tell if the description below sounds OK in English. It is a part of a description of a game.

    "Fixed on the wall are sheets of paper on which the following names of animals are written: „lion”, „deer”, „turtle”, ”wolf”, „fox”, „butterfly”, „eagle”.Each participant chooses the animal he/she prefers and faces the sheet of paper on which it is written.
    Participants form a group according to their choice of animal."

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    Re: is this good English

    Sounds good to me, snade 17. Instead of saying 'fixed on the wall' I would say 'attached to the wall' or 'posted on the wall'. But, this is just my own personal preference. Have fun with the game!

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    Re: is this good English

    Thank you very much for your suggestion. Now I see "posted on the wall" is what I want to say.

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