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    #1

    editing of short passage

    A few years ago, when I entered the office, I was surprised to see a few of my colleagues from another section there. I was also surprised that I was among the first staff members to reach the office. I was usually among the last persons to reach the office.

    A few minutes later, I thought it must be a public holiday and the staff from the other section were there as they had to supervise the labourers who had to work on that day. To confirm my belief, I checked my pocket calendar and, true enough, it was a public holiday.

    After that, I returned home. I did not tell anybody, including my parents, that I had been so forgetful. Neither did I inform my colleagues the next day about my mistake as I was afraid that they might laugh at me.

    Could some member/s edit the above short write-up for me?

    Thanks in advance.
    Last edited by Tan Elaine; 26-Jan-2010 at 17:00.


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    Re: editing of short passage

    Provide customer problem resolution regarding all customer issues by either handling the issues themselves or transferring the call to the appropriate bank personnel.

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    #3

    Re: editing of short passage

    Quote Originally Posted by svalenzuela View Post
    Provide customer problem resolution regarding all customer issues by either handling the issues themselves or transferring the call to the appropriate bank personnel.
    Hi Moderators

    Could you please delete Svalenzuela's reply because it doesn't make sense to me?

    Many thanks.

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    Re: editing of short passage

    Hi fellow members

    Could some member/s please correct any mistakes in my short passage.

    Thanks again.

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