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    • Join Date: Dec 2007
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    #1

    Smile Is that right when i say ......

    Hello,

    Thanks for this great forum, it really help me alot.

    anyway in my cv I wrote this sentence in the Experience Field:

    Working in telesales.
    Working in computer maintenance
    Working in online technical support
    so is that right or is there a better sentence for it?

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    #2

    Re: Is that right when i say ......

    I would suggest you say instead "X experience" or "experience in X"

    5 years of online technical support experience
    5 years of experience in online technical support

    The word "working" in a resume is weak. Of course you were working -- that's what you do at work. Better would be what you accomplished: Consistently received a five-star rating from customers for resolving technical issues online.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.


    • Join Date: Dec 2007
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    #3

    Re: Is that right when i say ......

    thank u so much

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