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    Can someone help me to correct these 2 sentence.

    1) I was taking the food out from the oven, and i lift up my leg and hit the door and cause the door to close and burn my hand.
    2) As i was taking something out from the oven, i move up my leg and have cause the door to close. In the process my hand is burn.

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    Re: Can someone help me to correct these 2 sentence.

    here is my attempt as one of your sentences.

    2) As i was taking something out from the oven, i move up my leg and have cause the door to close. In the process my hand is burn.

    As I was taking something out of the oven, I moved (up) my leg which caused the door to close/shut and this resulted in me burning my hand.

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