Kindly edit my letter

[Eugene1982]

Hi everyone,

Please find time to check my letter below. Many thanks in advance.
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Date : 27 January 2010
To : Car and Services
Attention : Mr. Abdel Fatah
Subject : Transportation services
Telephone No. : aaa-bbbb
Fax No. : aaa-cccc


Dear Mr. Fatah,

Please send me pamphlets and brochures of your available tourist buses.

I came to know your services through an article published by the Daily Tribune. This is a timely scenario since we will be having a field trip in Damman on February 28, 2010 wherein we will be hiring a special and unique tourist buses. I would like to consider your services.

I will appreciate it much if you can also send me a copy of the terms, conditions and cost of hiring your special buses.

I am looking forward hearing from you as soon as possible.

Sincerely yours,

Ddddd E. Fffff
Secretary

 

[Eugene1982]

Thanks for a million Gillnetter.