Student or Learner
Except the point 4, all the LC text is fine. Please request customer to change the point 4 - "copy certificate of inspection issued by ABC company" it will be more clear to avoid any confusion.
Please find attached revised document which has been added the PO 123 on it. Furthermore, how is the schedule? It must ship before CNY holiday, please provide us it today,
Last edited by Zoe2008; 28-Jan-2010 at 16:25.
Except for point 4....
Neither a teacher nor a native speaker.
I would say:
Please find the attached revised document which has added the PO 123.
(I hope "has added" is correct, because "has the PO 123 added" was my 2nd thought...)
You also could say:
Please find the attached revised document which contains the PO 123.
1. You refer to a special document, the document.
2. The PO 123 seems to be added to the document.