libyangirl2000
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- Jan 6, 2010
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Hello
how are u teacher
i want from you to check and correct the wrongs in my paragraph
all things ,grammar and punctuation
the first paragraph about describe someone i like
and i have describe my friend and this is my paragraph
how are u teacher
i want from you to check and correct the wrongs in my paragraph
all things ,grammar and punctuation
the first paragraph about describe someone i like
and i have describe my friend and this is my paragraph
My friend[FONT="][/FONT]
I want to describe my close friend ,who has blond long hair with eyebrow ,and brown big eyes ,white skin ,small nose, small mouth ,who is tall and thin , who[FONT="][/FONT]
Always helps me when I have problem, who has a white big heart.
the second paragraph is to describe a place
and i have describe my college
this is my paragraph
My college
MY college is a very big place, it has many departments ,my college is the Faculty of Arts, it has so many classes ,there is three buildings ,one of them is specialized for administrates, the other is specialized to department, and the third one is specialized[FONT="][/FONT]
For the classes, there is many specializations and each of them have units for example English consists to many unit like literature linguistics writing grammar ....etc, and there is a library where the students can study, it also has cafeteria and a big garden where the students can relax themselves between the lectures.[FONT="][/FONT]
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