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    Another piece of writing - please check it.

    Fruthermore, culture shock is a serious problem because people are physically and emotionally upset without fammiliar environment. That problem affects almost all of those who were involved in the new situations in a new country. People in the foregin countries do not have easy way to express feelings while they are deprived of information they understood by instinct. As well, people abroad can feel confused after collision with language barrier or differences in cutoms.

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    Re: Another piece of writing - please check it.

    Furthermore, culture shock is a serious problem because people are physically and emotionally tense in a new environment. Such problems affect mostly the people who face new situations in a foreign land. Often people visiting foreign countries cannot express feelings easily and may be deprived of some information, though some may have been understood by instinct. In addition, people abroad can become confused after facing language problems and/or differences in customs.

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