can any one please help me to correct my cover letter? im applying for summer internship. I am weak in English. Please help me.
I am an ambitious student, undertaking second year in BEng Civil Engineering at Galway-Mayo IT. I am seeking an internship/summer placement for 10 at (company name)
Fascinated with huge amazing structural works and mega-structures, Structural Engineering is the career option I would like to explore. I have acquired a sound overall knowledge of leading edge engineering principles with an emphasis on classroom design projects. I am proficient in the use of AutoCAD and Surveying Instruments which was proved by the successful projects presentation in the class. Going through the company profile and its future project plans, I am particularly drawn by the companys long established history, as I feel it would create more immediate strong opportunities in related field.
Along with perfect knowledge, I am fully experienced with group work and sincerity towards my aims. I have been incredibly impressed with the companys long historical reputation and all of the consultants at various fields, I’ve spoken with.
More importantly, an internship/summer placement with (company name) would be mutually beneficial. Your company is the market leader in civil engineering/ construction field, and i know that my excellent wide knowledge and motivation to excel will make me an asset to your Company.
I genuinely hope to attend for interview at any convenient time and look forward to your response.
My enclosed resume provides additional details about my background.
I am an ambitious student, undertaking second year in BEng Civil Engineering at Galway-Mayo IT. I am seeking an internship/summer placement for 10 at (company name)
Fascinated with huge amazing structural works and mega-structures, Structural Engineering is the career option I would like to explore. I have acquired a sound overall knowledge of leading edge engineering principles with an emphasis on classroom design projects. I am proficient in the use of AutoCAD and Surveying Instruments which was proved by the successful projects presentation in the class. Going through the company profile and its future project plans, I am particularly drawn by the companys long established history, as I feel it would create more immediate strong opportunities in related field.
Along with perfect knowledge, I am fully experienced with group work and sincerity towards my aims. I have been incredibly impressed with the companys long historical reputation and all of the consultants at various fields, I’ve spoken with.
More importantly, an internship/summer placement with (company name) would be mutually beneficial. Your company is the market leader in civil engineering/ construction field, and i know that my excellent wide knowledge and motivation to excel will make me an asset to your Company.
I genuinely hope to attend for interview at any convenient time and look forward to your response.
My enclosed resume provides additional details about my background.