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    • Join Date: Jul 2009
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    #1

    Help please

    I want to send an email to my proffessor and want the email to be GREAT
    here is what I wrote but haven't sent it yet:

    Hello Pro Cindy

    I had computer Application' class with you in summer 2009. I am graduating this semester and I will try to upgrade my scholarship to do my PhD. As you know the recommendation letter is one of the requirements of gaining admittance in most of the universities. Can I get a recommendation letter from you? It is going to help me a lot


    Thank you

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    • Join Date: Jul 2009
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    #2

    Re: Help please

    can someone helps me

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    • Join Date: Jan 2010
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    #3

    Re: Help please

    I would change the last three sentences:

    As you know, a letter of recommendation is one of the requirements for gaining admission to most universities. Would you be willing to write a recommendation for me? If you could, it would be a great help to me.


    • Join Date: Jul 2009
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    #4

    Re: Help please

    Quote Originally Posted by rlfwood View Post
    I would change the last three sentences:

    As you know, a letter of recommendation is one of the requirements for gaining admission to most universities. Would you be willing to write a recommendation for me? If you could, it would be a great help to me.
    thank you
    how about the first part! " before as you know"
    Is it correct

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    • Join Date: Jan 2010
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    #5

    Re: Help please

    Quote Originally Posted by FLU$H View Post
    thank you
    how about the first part! " before as you know"
    Is it correct
    Yes.


    • Join Date: Jul 2009
    • Posts: 11
    #6

    Re: Help please

    thank you

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