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  1. Gosiak
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    Statement

    Please help me to correct the grammar on the following statement:

    "We will be using a gel on your teeth, which can irritate the skin. Sometimes inevitably, some of this gel gets on your skin and we can not see. In case you feel any burning sensation of your skin, please let us know."

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    Re: Statement

    Quote Originally Posted by Gosiak View Post
    Please help me correct the grammar in the following statement:

    "We will be using a gel, which can irritate the skin, on your teeth, . (Sometimes)( Inevitably), some of this gel gets on your skin, and we can not see it there. In case you feel any burning sensation on your skin, please let us know."
    You can't keep both "Sometimes" and "inevitably"; chose one.
    I prefer 'on your skin'.
    Last edited by 2006; 04-Feb-2010 at 00:18.

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