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    please,would you like to help me to correct this conclusion

    "Make an end of theses sorts of pollution is the duty of everyone from us establishing awareness compainges praising with the gravity of this pollution,and its risks to human beings health on the one hand and all the planet on the other one."


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    Re: please,would you like to help me to correct this conclusion

    Quote Originally Posted by julianna View Post
    "Making // To make an end to these sorts of pollution is the duty of everyone from us establishing awareness compainges campaigns emphasizing praising with the gravity of this pollution,and its risks to human beings health on the one hand and all the planet on the other one."

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    Re: please,would you like to help me to correct this conclusion

    thank you so much!!

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    #4

    Re: please,would you like to help me to correct this conclusion

    we say; the duty of everyone, from establishing awareness campaigns emphasizing...?

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    Re: please,would you like to help me to correct this conclusion

    I think, from a psychological aspect, saying "our duty" instead of "the duty of everyone" has a much more powerful effect on the readers.

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