Results 1 to 2 of 2
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Malay
      • Home Country:
      • Malaysia
      • Current Location:
      • Malaysia

    • Join Date: Apr 2009
    • Posts: 513
    #1

    Can somebody help me correct this essay please

    Our Japanese Green Tea company was established in the year of 1854. We are currently distributing our product to businesses throughout the continent of Asia and Australia. The city of Uji in Kyoto, Japan is the home to out tea plantation and it is renowned for producing the best green tea in the whole of Japan. Our tea refinery has extensive knowledge of tea refinement with over 150 years of experience. In order to ensure that we deliver the highest quality product to our customer, all our tea will go through strict quality control and only the highest quality green tea will be selected. Nishio’s green tea is tasty and is highly recommended health balance diet drink. It ‘health benefits was proven scientifically.

    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Malay
      • Home Country:
      • Malaysia
      • Current Location:
      • Malaysia

    • Join Date: Apr 2009
    • Posts: 513
    #2

    Re: Can somebody help me correct this essay please

    Thanks for helping, i will keep in mind what you've told me.

Similar Threads

  1. [Essay] Any teachers here willing to help me correct my essay?
    By student001 in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 16-Apr-2009, 02:52
  2. What is needed to write a good essay?
    By Lana_J in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 29-Mar-2009, 19:52
  3. Please, CORRECT my ESSAY
    By Park Jeong-eun in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 22-Feb-2008, 01:59
  4. Could you please correct my essay. it is the first essay i write
    By leangguek in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 09-Feb-2008, 05:10

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •