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what will my collage degree will say about me?
My college degree will say that I am a person who does not give up easily and that is responsible. I like challenges, so that is why I am taking two AP classes and one honor class in high school. Since I was little, I always liked computers. When I was a junior in high school, I took a computer science class. At first it was hard, but then it became fun because of the way programs work so now my goal is to get a degree on computer science. I know that earning a degree in that field is challenging because it involves advance math, but I know that with my determination, I will be able to achieve my goal.
I am a first generation college student. My parents will be very happy and proud because I will get my collegedegree. I know that it will mean a lot to them and could also help them to have a better lifestyle.