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    Kinldy check the sentence

    Does facebook ever invest a penny on ads? It’s the innovation that makes the site no. 1. The only advertising vehicle it capitalized is ‘the word of mouth advertising’ that worth trillions, and the most powerful communication but still cost you nothing.

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    Does facebook ever invest a penny on ads? It’s the innovation that makes the site no. 1. The only advertising vehicle it capitalized is ‘the word of mouth advertising;’ the most powerful communication tool that spreads message like a razing fire/lightning speed because it carries genuine credibility, but still cost you nothing.
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    Does facebook ever invest a penny on ads? It’s the innovation that makes the site no. 1. The only advertising vehicle it capitalized is ‘the word of mouth advertising;’ the most powerful communication tool that spreads message like a razing fire @ lightning speed because it carries genuine credibility, but still cost you nothing.
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    Exclamation Re: Kinldy check the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Does facebook ever invest a penny on ads? It’s the innovation that makes the site no. 1. The only advertising vehicle it capitalized is ‘the word of mouth advertising’ that is worth trillions, and the most powerful communication, (but still) yet costs you nothing.

    or

    Does facebook ever invest a penny on ads? It’s the innovation that makes the site no. 1. The only advertising vehicle it capitalized is ‘the word of mouth advertising;’ the most powerful communication tool that spreads message like a razing fire at lightning speed because it carries genuine credibility, yet (but still) costs you nothing.
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    Does facebook ever invest a penny on ads? It’s the innovation that makes the site no. 1. The only advertising vehicle it capitalized is ‘the word of mouth advertising;’ the most powerful communication tool that spreads message like a razing fire @ lightning speed because it carries genuine credibility, but still / yet costs you nothing.
    Nice expressions. You can use 'but still' or 'yet'

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    Re: Kinldy check the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by sarat_106 View Post
    Nice expressions. You can use 'but still' or 'yet'
    Same with twitter and orkut, indeed all other brands urge their target audience to join their groups on facebook/twitter etc. Facebook / twitter gets space free of cost in print ads, online ads, every media indeed. Let us see the offline brands, ‘Xerox,’ so how often you have seen this name? It’s oblivious isn’t it?

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