Results 1 to 2 of 2
  1. Newbie
    Student or Learner

    • Join Date: Feb 2010
    • Posts: 2
    #1

    Grammar check pleaseeeeee

    Today, I like having a something. Something that makes me very sad. Actually until now this minute. I suddenly realized that. People I love are happy. She is always on in me. But I really do not deserve her. Her than me in all aspects. When meet again on how she cut the contact. I also do not anymore. Feeling the abuse so. I'm afraid. I fear the memories grief he Left back. I just hope it will disappear forever. If after this, I love someone else, I have to do is not who is not? After her, I also love each other. But I still captivated by her. I can not do out of ignorance. Everything bad luck continued to me.
    But even so I hope she is happy
    Good luck.




    I dont know how to correct this letter

  2. kfredson's Avatar

    • Join Date: Dec 2009
    • Posts: 700
    #2

    Re: Grammar check pleaseeeeee

    Quote Originally Posted by ashtray View Post
    Today, I like having a something. Something that makes me very sad. Actually until now this minute. I suddenly realized that. People I love are happy. She is always on in me. But I really do not deserve her. Her than me in all aspects. When meet again on how she cut the contact. I also do not anymore. Feeling the abuse so. I'm afraid. I fear the memories grief he Left back. I just hope it will disappear forever. If after this, I love someone else, I have to do is not who is not? After her, I also love each other. But I still captivated by her. I can not do out of ignorance. Everything bad luck continued to me.
    But even so I hope she is happy
    Good luck.


    I dont know how to correct this letter
    Can you explain what you are trying to say in the sentences marked in red? Your meaning is often not clear.

Similar Threads

  1. check my grammar
    By YOJ in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 14-Sep-2009, 03:27
  2. [Grammar] Hello! I need some grammar check
    By halfknot in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 13
    Last Post: 26-Aug-2009, 06:19
  3. [Grammar] Hello I need some grammar check .Please help.
    By amyjung in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: 13-Aug-2009, 22:34
  4. Replies: 2
    Last Post: 29-Aug-2007, 11:41
  5. please check my grammar
    By bbmak in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 04-Aug-2006, 11:58

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •