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    Can somebody help me correct these sentences?Thanks

    1) Spend time with someone without feeling awkward is really important.
    2) Can we meet up the next time when i am in the city?
    3) Do you want to go there the next time when we are in the city?



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    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) Being able to spend time with someone without feeling awkward is really important.
    2) Can we meet up the next time I am in the city?
    3) Do you want to go there the next time we are in the city?

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    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?Thanks

    OR.....
    1) "Spending time with someone..........."
    2) Can we meet the next time....."
    3) (Same suggestion as jeckel)

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