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    Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    1) The coldness/wind have diminish/eliminate my sleepiness.
    2) Once your tiredness become too strong, you will no longer feel tired.
    3) Once your hunger become too severe, you will loss the apetite to eat and won't feel hungry anymore.


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    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) The coldness/wind ha
    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    s diminished/eliminated my sleepiness.
    2) Once your tiredness has become too strong, you will no longer feel tired.
    3) Once your hunger has become too severe, you will loseyourappetite to eat and won't feel hungry anymore.


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    The edit will not allow me to change the quote section.

    The coldness/wind has diminished/eliminated my sleepiness.
    2) Once your tiredness has become too strong, you will no longer feel tired.
    3) Once your hunger has become too severe, you will lose your appetite to eat and won't feel hungry anymore.

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