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Gina Yeung
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Hello, I am high school student and i am doing an assignment to develop a mission statement of a sportswear manufacturer, i hope you can help me check the sentence structure of the following statement:
Leading the sportswear market by developing high quality and innovative fabric and offering the comfortable and durable sportswear.
is it in a right sentence structure?
or is there any suggestion to imporve this statement?
Thank you very much and look forward to hearing your correction!
Leading the sportswear market by developing high quality and innovative fabric and offering the comfortable and durable sportswear.
is it in a right sentence structure?
or is there any suggestion to imporve this statement?
Thank you very much and look forward to hearing your correction!