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    correction of sentence

    Despite her age her skill in embroidery seems more greatly now than it did when she was young

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    Re: correction of sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by JAMES CHRISTOPHER View Post
    Despite her age her skill in embroidery seems more greatly now than it did when she was young
    ***NOT A TEACHER***

    Good morning, James.

    Maybe something such as: Despite her age, she seems more skilled in embroidery now than when she was younger.

    Thank you.

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