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Tinastroud
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Could you please look at the below sentences and let me know if they are correct.
I am Eliminating Jargon and Simplifying Language.
1. Per your request, Emile provided several references with her job application.
2. Reply if you wish for us to precede going forward with this matter.
3. Sarah expects to use our proposal at the department meeting Friday morning.
4. To expedite the processing of your order, please include your contact information.
5. The penultimate and ultimate reasons for hiring our firm are our proven adroitness and efficaciousness.
The number five I have not touched it at all, I am not sure about it.
thanks
I am Eliminating Jargon and Simplifying Language.
1. Per your request, Emile provided several references with her job application.
2. Reply if you wish for us to precede going forward with this matter.
3. Sarah expects to use our proposal at the department meeting Friday morning.
4. To expedite the processing of your order, please include your contact information.
5. The penultimate and ultimate reasons for hiring our firm are our proven adroitness and efficaciousness.
The number five I have not touched it at all, I am not sure about it.
thanks