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    Kinldy check paragraph on advertising

    The height of creativity - When you do not have any idea or concept to promote your brand then the only solution is to show competitorís product in bad light or inferior to your product. This is the case of Rin ad who have taken extremely bold decision of show competitorís product; tide packet in the ad. In the long run it would dampen the reputation of Rin.

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    Re: Kinldy check paragraph on advertising

    not at teacher

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    The height of creativity - When you do not have any idea or concept to promote your brand then the only solution is to show competitorís product in (a)bad light or as being inferior to your product. This is the case of Rin ad who have (which has)taken (an) extremely bold decision of show (showing a)competitorís product; tide (??) packet in the ad. In the long run it would dampen the reputation of Rin.
    I wouldn't call this creativity though.

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    Exclamation Re: Kinldy check paragraph on advertising

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    The height of creativity - When you do not have any idea or concept to promote your brand then the only solution is to show competitor’s product in a bad light or as being inferior to your product. This is the case with (of) Rin (ad)who have taken an extremely bold decision to (of) show competitor’s product; Tide packet in the ad. In the long run it would dampen the reputation of Rin.
    Skp
    Last edited by sarat_106; 07-Mar-2010 at 16:36.

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    Re: Kinldy check paragraph on advertising

    I couldn't associate the title with the rest of the text. Maybe you should have called it "The Lack of Creativity"

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    Exclamation Re: Kinldy check paragraph on advertising

    Quote Originally Posted by euncu View Post
    I couldn't associate the title with the rest of the text. Maybe you should have called it "The Lack of Creativity"
    Yes, it could be the lack or absence of creativity.

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