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I would like to check my writting for mistakes(feel free to correct everything that not mind). I come from Sweden and I'm studying English for my 1st year, so my English isn't O.K. Thank you a lot, here it is:
It was a summer day evening. The sun was still shining and the day hasn't finished for anybody in the small town. I was walking near the bridge where some people were fishing and others were sunbathing. I was watching some children playing on it, when I suddenly heard a noise.
It was Mrs Robinson - a neighbour of mine. Her little dog, called Spinky, was in the water. I knew I had to do something. I took off my hat and bravely jumped in the water. I swim well so it was easy for me to go to the dog and pull it out. It was safe now.
Everybody were looking at me intently for a while. Then they noisily applauded me. In the end Mrs Robinson come and thnked me. I was proud of myself. She invited me to come to her house to give me a tret. I said that the best reward for me is to help somebody in trouble.
It was one of those evening on a summer's day. The sun was still shining brightly and day had not ended for anybody in this small town. I was walking near the bridge where some people were fishing and few others were sunbathing, when suddenly i heard a noise.
It was Mrs. Robinshon, a neighbour of mine. Her little dog, called Spinky fell into the water and I knew that I had to do something to help her.I threw my hat and bravely jumped into the water. As i am a good swimmer, it was easy for me to rescue the dog.
Everyone was looking at me intently for a while.. then they applauded me. Mrs. Robinson approached me and thanked me earnestly.
I was proud of myself. As a gesture of gratitude, she invited me to her house to treat me. I was very humbled and i said Thanks Mrs Robinson , but i feel that the best reward for me is to help someone who is in trouble.