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    Pls Provide me the Sample

    I want to write an loan application to my office director ( it is importer company ) the reason of my writing an application is that I want buy a frigid and repaint my home there for I need Rs/= xxxxxx but I can not any idea who can I start the application. Please provide me the loan application sample.

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    Re: Pls Provide me the Sample

    Quote Originally Posted by jollysalman View Post
    I want to write an loan application to my office director ( it is importer company ) the reason of my writing an application is that I want buy a frigid and repaint my home there for I need Rs/= xxxxxx but I can not any idea who can I start the application. Please provide me the loan application sample.
    I am respectfully requesting a loan of Rs xxxxx to enable me to purchase a refrigerator and to repaint my home.

    I hope that is what you are asking.

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    Re: Pls Provide me the Sample

    pls suggest me the complete format of the letter. for explain

    i m working in your firm as an Accountant. The reason of my writing i want to purchase a refrigerator and to repaint my home therefor I am respectfully requesting a loan of Rs xxxxx to enable me to purchase a refrigerator and to repaint my home.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jollysalman View Post
    pls suggest me the complete format of the letter. for explain

    i m working inI am currently employed by your firm as an Accountant. The reason for my writing i want to purchase a refrigerator and to repaint my home therefor I am respectfully requesting is to request a loan of Rs xxxxx to enable me to purchase a refrigerator and to repaint my home.
    That is how I would write it. I hope that is helpful.

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    Re: Pls Provide me the Sample

    thanks for your helping sir, but i m not satisfied.

    Respected Sir,
    I would like to bring your kind attention to the following few lines for sympathetic consideration.
    With all due respect, I am requesting your good office a sum of Rs. 60,000 (Sixty Thousand) as loan to Purchase a Refrigerator and Repaint to my home. Kindly consider this subject as early as possible.
    I will be so grateful for your kind consideration and positive action.
    Best Regards,


    please check sir it is perfect?

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    Re: Pls Provide me the Sample

    You are asking for something that does not exist in our culture. We would never, ever ask our employers for a loan.

    Additionally, the language you use, like "for your sympathetic consideration," would be considered overly flowery and sound absurd in a business setting.

    Therefore, you need the write the letter the way it sounds right to you, because nothing about it will sound right to me.

    However, you definitely need to use lower-case letters for purchase, refrigerator, and repaint.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jollysalman View Post
    thanks for your helping sir, but i m not satisfied.

    Respected Sir,
    I would like to bring your kind attention to the following few lines for sympathetic consideration.
    With all due respect, I am requesting your good office a sum of Rs. 60,000 (Sixty Thousand) as loan to Purchase a Refrigerator and Repaint to my home. Kindly consider this subject as early as possible.
    I will be so grateful for your kind consideration and positive action.
    Best Regards,


    please check sir it is perfect?
    It is not the way I would say it but it sounds fine. Perhaps it is the way you write a letter in your country. I agree that you need to do it in your own style.

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    if you Doesnít like my style so kindly change it for me because i think if you Doesnít not like my letter style then my boss also Doesnít like it. so pls change it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Barb_D View Post
    You are asking for something that does not exist in our culture. We would never, ever ask our employers for a loan.
    We could ask for an advance, though- is that done in the States?

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    It's certainly not common in corporate America. It may be more common in small businesses. The only time I've ever seen it is in movies set several decades ago, when men still wore hats.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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