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  1. Unregistered
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    hey

    for,against mobile phones?
    One of the most popular invention in the world is deffinitly mobile phone.It s har do believe how to mobile phones became so popular in the early ages.A lots of technologies are changed some people life,expeceally mobile phones.But,we are asked,why is mobile phone so popular?

    One of the positive aspects of mobile phone is that when we are in some trouble,we can call somebody who will find a way to help us.One of the advantages of this invention is that there are useful then telephone.For example,when we are late into the school,we can call some friend and say that we are coming soon

    On the other hand,mobile phone can be danger for us.We can say that mobile phone affect for us healt.Some people says that this kind of technologie has bad influence.

    In my opinion,i think mobile phones are for me very useful and they have some power.Every minute in the wolrd,some people buy a new mobile.Teenagers also have a very difference kind of mobile phones.In the end we can say that mobile phones will be usefuls in the future then today

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    Re: hey

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    for,against mobile phones?
    One of the most popular invention in the world is deffinitly mobile phone.It s har do believe how to mobile phones became so popular in the early ages.A lots of technologies are changed some people life,expeceally mobile phones.But,we are asked,why is mobile phone so popular?

    One of the positive aspects of mobile phone is that when we are in some trouble,we can call somebody who will find a way to help us.One of the advantages of this invention is that there are useful then telephone.For example,when we are late into the school,we can call some friend and say that we are coming soon

    On the other hand,mobile phone can be danger for us.We can say that mobile phone affect for us healt.Some people says that this kind of technologie has bad influence.

    In my opinion,i think mobile phones are for me very useful and they have some power.Every minute in the wolrd,some people buy a new mobile.Teenagers also have a very difference kind of mobile phones.In the end we can say that mobile phones will be usefuls in the future then today
    If you are asking for this to be corrected, you need to proofread it yourself first.
    There are numerous errors that have nothing to do with your knowledge of the language. For example, you could run it through a spell checker, and fix the spellings.
    It's pretty poor form posting rubbish like this.

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