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    Please correct my text

    I already booked the ticket and the cost is USD540.00. The difference cost is only USD40.00 if departure from China. So, we decided air / departure from HK which will be more convenience. It seems the ticket cost is so expensive which can be cover with the tourist cost.

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    Re: Please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I already booked the ticket and the cost is USD540.00. The difference in cost is only USD40.00 if the departure is from China. So, we decided air / departure to depart from HK, which will be more convenient. It seems the ticket cost is so expensive which can be covered with the tourist cost.
    I am not sure what the last sentence means.

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