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The rescuers at the front have just helped the people in the train. A lot of people died, some are just wounded. They are all shocked, and are
discussing what could happen. They donít know what happened because GR
they are just arrived. They are guessing what went wrong. The train could GR
have a collision with another train, or it could be a terroristís attack. Or GR
maybe there was an earthquake. One of the trains is very old and there is a lot of graffiti on the side of the train.
Some of the rescuers go searching to other wounded people. They have VOC
already found 29 death people. At the same time, the police have to keep VOC
the curious people and the press away. But there are already made a lot GR
of pictures and videos out of helicopters. And the news is going around the hole world. VOC