[Grammar] Correct my grammar

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darco

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1. I was participated on projects of creative workshop, to create animations,
multimedia and web presentations.

2. If i work practice somewhere, I'm [FONT=&quot]" Trainee"[/FONT] or how to write it.

3. Final exam to graduate or Final exam to earn BC Degree, what is good ?

[FONT=&quot][/FONT]4. Providing internet services to local customers

5. Maintenance of network equipment under supervision
 

ha179

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1. I was participated on projects of creative workshop, to create animations,multimedia and web presentations.
I participated in some projects of a creative workshop to create animations, multimedia and web presentation
2. If i work practice somewhere, I'm [FONT=&quot]" Trainee"[/FONT] or how to write it.
You are a trainee if you are taught how to do a particular job (or you practice working in a particular place)
3. Pass the Final exam to graduate or Final exam to earn BC Degree, what is good ?
I think both are acceptable.
4. Providing internet service[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] for local customers
5. Maintenance of network equipment under supervision
If this is a noun phrase, you're right, but you can turn this into a sentence: Network equipment should be maintain under supervision.
 
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