Hi there

My English is not that bad I just struggle with my grammar and using coomas etc.

I was wanting to send a message to some one and make sure that the grammar was correct can you help me .

The sentence is as follows.

Paul you said that you tried to send Sarah a message but it must of been block. Could yo please tell me how you manged to send the first message then.

Sarah did not want me to send you an email as she thought it would cause trouble for her in work and was not happy that I did.

You have caused a lot of trouble for me with Sarah because of this. As I said you manged to send her message on Friday night after you got in the house and asked her for number and gave yours,

So I don't believe that you did try and send her a massage to say sorry.

Does this make sense and is my grammar OK.