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    As planned, the following items have been handed over to the client except item#XXX. Mr. X said that it would not be invoiced / charged to the client as the item had been returned / cancelled.

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    Re: Is this sentence correct?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    As planned, the following items have been handed over to the client except item#XXX( should be a colon here : follow by the items.) Mr. X said that it(which item? item xxx?) would not be invoiced / charged to the client as the item had been returned / cancelled.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    As planned, the following items have been handed over to the client except item #XXX. Mr. X said that (it) the same would not be invoiced / charged to the client as it has (the item had) been returned / cancelled.
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