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    #1

    where is the mistake?

    Too many cars in city centres can create pollution, cars noise and congestion.

    centres ,will it be centre?

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    Re: where is the mistake?

    Quote Originally Posted by nado92 View Post
    Too many cars in city centres can create pollution, cars noise and congestion.

    centres ,will it be centre?
    'Centres' is fine - changing it to 'centre' would change the meaning of the sentence (and you should add 'a' or 'the' before 'city' then). I would change 'cars noise' to 'car noise'.

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    Re: where is the mistake?

    thanks. It will be good too.

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    #4

    Re: where is the mistake?

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    Cars create car noise - sounds a bit silly doesn't it?

    Too many cars in the city centres will cause air pollution, noise pollution and traffic congestion.

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    Re: where is the mistake?

    Quote Originally Posted by nado92 View Post
    thanks. It will be good too.
    Not 'too'. 'Cars noise' doesn't sound good at all.

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    Re: where is the mistake?

    Quote Originally Posted by tedtmc View Post
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    Cars create car noise - sounds a bit silly doesn't it?

    Too many cars in the city centres will cause air pollution, noise pollution and traffic congestion.
    I agree with you.

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    Re: where is the mistake?

    Quote Originally Posted by tedtmc View Post
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    Cars create car noise - sounds a bit silly doesn't it?

    Too many cars in the city centres will cause air pollution, noise pollution and traffic congestion.
    Why change 'can' to 'will'?

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    #8

    Re: where is the mistake?

    It is almost a certainty. Well, guess I shouldn't change the sense of the sentence.

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    #9

    Re: where is the mistake?

    Too many cars in city centres can create pollution, cars noise and congestion.

    Is cars here right?
    or
    Should it be car?


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    #10

    Re: where is the mistake?

    If you insist on keeping it, then the singular "car." However, I completely agree with the prior poster that cars make "car noise" so you can drop that word.

    ... air and noise pollution and congestion
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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