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    Kindly check my sentences

    1. It is exciting to have our first issue of PURE magazine come out really great. I am sure that you have loved the magazine.

    2.We are proud to present first time ever Dial-a-vertu offer, come & feel the experience of using luxury handset - Vertu phone.

    3. Is these offers are enough for you? How can we forget the very special day of the year – Mothers Day?

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    Re: Kindly check my sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    1. It is exciting to have our first issue of PURE magazine come out really great. I am sure that you have loved the magazine.

    2.We are proud to present first time ever Dial-a-vertu offer, come & feel the experience of using luxury handset - Vertu phone.

    3. Is these offers are enough for you? How can we forget the very special day of the year – Mothers Day?
    1. We're excited about the first issue of PURE magazine. We're sure you'll love it.
    2. We are proud to present, for the first time ever, our Dial-a-Vertu offer. Come and experience a luxury handset - the Vertu phone.
    3. Are these offers enough for you? How could we forget that very special day of the year - Mother's Day?

    Just my suggestions.

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