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    Proper English?

    Does the sentence " ABC company has several 3rd party vendors with which it contracts with to perform the external optimizations" make sense?

    Any assistance would be appreciated

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    Re: Proper English?

    It does, but it's a bit wordy.

    Perhaps you could say that you have strategic alliances with a number of trusted sub-contractors who perform the actual optimizations.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Proper English?

    It probably makes sense to the speaker and listener who understand the business but not knowing the business, I don't know what "external optimizations" are. But, in any case, you don't need the second "with".

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    Re: Proper English?

    Oops! Totally missed the double "with."

    Thanks!
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    Re: Proper English?

    But in this ever changing world in which we live in

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