羡鱼-Xianyu
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Aunt Harriet presided over an invisible army of servants that continuously scrubbed, cleaned, and polished. She always referred to them as 'the shifting population', for they came and went with such frequency that I never even got a chance to learn their names. Though my aunt pursued what was, in those days, an enlightened policy, in that she never allowed her domestic staff to work more than eight hours a day, she was extremely difficult to please.
Hi teachers,
Can 'what was' be ommitted? I mean that can I reword the part in blue like this: Though my aunt pursued an enlightened policy in those days, in that she never allowed her domestic staff to work more than eight hours a day, she was extremely difficult to please.
In my humble opinion, 'what was' seems to be unneccessary in here. Without it, this sentence can still keep the same meaning. Besides the rephrased one is much more concise.
Any opinions are highly appreciated. Thanks in advance.
Hi teachers,
Can 'what was' be ommitted? I mean that can I reword the part in blue like this: Though my aunt pursued an enlightened policy in those days, in that she never allowed her domestic staff to work more than eight hours a day, she was extremely difficult to please.
In my humble opinion, 'what was' seems to be unneccessary in here. Without it, this sentence can still keep the same meaning. Besides the rephrased one is much more concise.
Any opinions are highly appreciated. Thanks in advance.