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    #1

    How can I write sentence A and B into 1 sentence?

    Hi,

    SentenceA:
    I want to secure an entry level position in the manufacturing industry.
    SentenceB:
    I want to secure an entry level position where my IT skills and analytical mind will be put to good use.

    Question:
    How can I write sentence A and B into 1 sentence?

    Sentence1:
    I want to secure an entry level position in the manufacturing industry where my IT skills and analytical mind will be put to good use.
    Sentence2:
    I want to secure an entry level position where my IT skills and analytical mind will be put to good use in the manufacturing industry.

    Thanks

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    Re: How can I write sentence A and B into 1 sentence?

    Hello Uktous,
    Both sentences are grammatically correct but sentence 1 is probably what you want because your preference is to have a job in the manufacturing industry where you can apply your skills and analytical mind. Sentence 2 suggests you'll accept any job (not only in the manufacturing industry) that offers you a chance to use your skills and mind that will benefit the manufacturing industry.

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