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    #1

    Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    1) His persistence in/with getting promotion paid off.
    2) His persistence in/with getting a new house paid off.

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    #2

    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    I like "persistence in".

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    #3

    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) His persistence in getting a promotion paid off.
    2) His persistence in getting a new house paid off.
    2006

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    #4

    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    Thanks for helping correct my english. :)

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