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    #1

    Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    1) It is not fair for you because you have do all the homework by yourself.
    2) It's not fair to you/for you because you have to do everything and he don't.
    3) You need a clear mind to make a good decision.
    4) Idea and solutions will start flowing if you have a clear mind/peaceful mind so don't try to find solutions or idea when you are stress out/ under stressful condition/ angry condition/sad condition.


    • Join Date: Apr 2010
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    #2

    Smile Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    The sentences are complicated. Try to reframe them.

    1. It is not fair (to you) since you have to do all the homework by yourself.
    or
    It is not fair that you have to do your homework by yourself
    2. It is not fair (to you) since you have to do everything he doesn't
    (or)
    It is not fair (to you) since you have to do everything which he doesn't.
    3. You need a clear mind to make a good decision. (Its Fine)
    or.
    To make good decisions all that you need is a 'clear mind'.

    4. Never try to find solutions or ideas when you are stressed out, angry or sad because ideas and solutions will start to flow only when you have a clear and calm mind.

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