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    Are theses sentences correct?



    Are theses sentences correct?

    1- What a hard life you have gone through! Yet,
    It has never affected your Kindness!

    2- The shoelace is wet, I can't undo it

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    Re: Are theses sentences correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by tasneemspring View Post

    Are theses sentences correct?

    1- What a hard life you have gone through! Yet,
    It has never affected your Kindness!

    2- The shoelace is wet, I can't undo it
    1 - What a hard life you've had! Yet it hasn't affected your kindness.

    2 - Your sentence is fine. I would perhaps add "and" to show cause and effect: "The shoelace is wet and I can't undo it." (Remember the full stop at the end.)

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