RoseSpring
Member
- Joined
- Mar 13, 2009
- Member Type
- Academic
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Egypt
- Current Location
- Egypt
Are theses sentences correct?
1- Come on, all of you leave the ladder in order for you not to
be hurt, except for Jack and Paul.
( they are children carrying a ladder with their father and mother and their father is the one who has said this; he orders them to leave the ladder, so how can I say it?)
2- A, "What's wrong with Helen?"
B, "Her stomach aches, that's all."
6- You may get sick for burdening yourself with many
responsibilities.
( Is there another simpler and more direct way to express
this?)