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    Smile sentence correction

    Dear teacher,

    Would you be kind enough to correct the following two sentences:

    1. Two days ago, when I was on my way home in the evening, there was

    a fire event occuring in my neighborhood.

    2. This event gives us a lesson "fire and water have no mercy."

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    Re: sentence correction

    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    Dear teacher,

    Would you be kind enough to correct the following two sentences:

    1. Two days ago, when I was on my way home in the evening, there was

    a fire event occuring in my neighborhood.

    2. This event gives us a lesson "fire and water have no mercy."
    1. Two days ago, while I was on my way home in the evening, there was
    a fire in my neighbourhood.

    2. This teaches us a lesson: "fire and water have no mercy."

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