[Essay] Rephrasing

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"He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct?
 

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"He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct?

I'm afraid I don't actually understand what you mean by that sentence, which makes it difficult to help.

Could you post some alternatives that you think might work, so that we get a better idea of what you mean? Thanks.
 
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