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    grammer check

    Teacher please tell me is it write to say,
    I am your affectionate brother.
    Had you been with me it would have been better.

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    Re: grammer check

    Okay.
    I'd put a comma after "me."
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: grammar check

    Quote Originally Posted by Ankkuurr View Post
    Teacher, please tell me is it write right to say,
    I am your affectionate brother.
    Had you been with me it would have been better.
    Barb D's answer is perfect. Please see the corrections to your post, in red.

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    Re: grammer check

    Oops. Totally missed that, though!
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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