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  1. CayceMarie
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    History- 'The New Deal'

    I have to answer a question on The New Deal (USA) for a History essay, and i would like some help as im kind of stuck on a part.

    In the middle of my essay i've started to write this:

    Also, Eleanor Roosevelt became an important campaigner on social issues. This is imprtant as it allowed women to become ambitious. They earned alot if money which helped for them to start living the Americandream by themselves as they could now become more independent than before.

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    Re: History- 'The New Deal'

    Quote Originally Posted by CayceMarie View Post
    I have to answer a question on The New Deal (USA) for a history essay, and I would like some help as I'm kind of stuck on a part.

    In the middle of my essay I've started to write this:

    Also, Eleanor Roosevelt became an important campaigner on social issues. This is was important as it allowed women to become ambitious. They could earned a lot if of money which helped for them to start living the American dream more independently by themselves as they could now become more independent than before.
    See my suggestions in red.

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