this is a v.short poem
i hope you like it
:i feel sick sence you left me and went apart
every thing i have i gave you even my heart
Last edited by mickel; 17-Apr-2010 at 20:15.
Sorry for my curiousity, but I wonder why a native made such a mistake, plus he specialized in academic area. Are you really a native English, Mickel?
Any way, I enjoyed reading your very short poem.