A short poem

[mickel]

this is a v.short poem

i hope you like it

:i feel sick sence you left me and went apart
every thing i have i gave you even my heart


faithfull

 

[Ever Student]

this is a v.short poem

i hope you like it

:i feel sick sence you left me and went apart
every thing i have i gave you even my heart


faithfull

Hello mickel,
Would you please give me more explanation about "V short poem"?

Thanks in advance

 

[Raymott]

Hello mickel,
Would you please give me more explanation about "V short poem"?

Thanks in advance

I think v. is supposed to mean 'very'.

The poem means:
I feel sick since you left me and went away.
Everything I had, I gave to you, even my heart.

 

[mickel]

I think v. is supposed to mean 'very'.

The poem means:
I feel sick since you left me and went away.
Everything I had, I gave to you, even my heart.

right v its mean very

but why had

 

[Raymott]

right v its mean very

but why had

You use 'had' because if you've given everything you own to her, then you no longer 'have' it. You had it, now she has it.

(You need to be careful of giving everything you have to women! - or men, as the case may be.) :-D

 

[Ever Student]

Sorry for my curiousity, but I wonder why a native made such a mistake, plus he specialized in academic area. Are you really a native English, Mickel?
Any way, I enjoyed reading your very short poem.

 

[mickel]

Sorry for my curiousity, but I wonder why a native made such a mistake, plus he specialized in academic area. Are you really a native English, Mickel?
Any way, I enjoyed reading your very short poem.

yeah im from uk i swore but i live in middle east


why you asked

 

[mickel]

You use 'had' because if you've given everything you own to her, then you no longer 'have' it. You had it, now she has it.

(You need to be careful of giving everything you have to women! - or men, as the case may be.) :-D

thank u
im a grateful to you


but i did not understand "you need...." are you mean"dont give any one every thing or what?:-D:lol:

 

[Ever Student]

thank u
im a grateful to you


but i did not understand "you need...." are you mean"dont give any one every thing or what?:-D:lol:

Hello Mickel,
Because you made drastically some mistakes suc as; A grateful, using "have" in past tense, "sence" in place of "since"... your native language might have been changed in middle east!!!

 

[Raymott]

thank u
im a grateful to you


but i did not understand "you need...." are you mean"dont give any one every thing or what?:-D:lol:

Yes.

You need to try to use some punctuation.

Also, Taghavi is questioning whether your native language is English, as you claim in your profile, because your English is poor.