Could you please tell me if the structure and punctuation in this sentence is correct?
"Understanding the desire in students to achieve communicative competence, it is therefore, logical to focus on those strategies, which may have a potential benefit in the development of this area of foreign language learning."
Thank you very much
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.