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  1. Senior Member
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    • Join Date: Apr 2009
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    #1

    Can somebody help me correct these sentences?Thanks

    1) The word please is the message he wrote mean he is desperate for help.
    2) When student get into the working and start making money, they will be trill with it. Soon they will fall in love/ enjoy the feeling of money making.
    3) They will develop the passion and love for money making.
    4) They will find enjoyment in money making.

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    #2

    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?Thanks

    Shouldn't "please" be in inverted commas?

    Students plural.

    not at teacher

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