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    Can you look at my letter.

    This is a letter to my future employee.
    I want to ask him few questions. Can you fix it please.



    Dear Mr. Garrett.
    Hello Mr Garrett, how are you today? I'm XXXX, student from Kazan. I had an interview with you last week at Shalyapin hotel about vacancy in Almetevsk city. You said that will call me in a few days, maybe I missed your call? I called Igor’ today and he said its fine with. But he couldn’t tell me starting days. And ask me to contact with you.
    I ‘d like to ask you couple of questions.
    1.I’d like to know when I should to start work.
    2.I had applied for a J1 visa before I knew about this job. And they already did all paper work. I’ll have an interview with VISA Officer in 28 of May. Could I request a confirmation that I get hired and will start work at __________please, so I could explain to officer about situation and cancel my Visa.
    3.Or I already have all documents to go to USA and I already paid all fees. Maybe in XXX Company we have some opportunities with internship. In this case I could have a training in the Head office (or branch) of XXX for a few month. And in my view I could better understand main work keys of XXXX company workin in the head office and after coming back to my country I can contribute more to my job. I can use my J1 visa to internship.

    Looking forward to hear from you soon.
    Fatefully yours
    Feel free to contact with me at XXXXX

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    Re: Can you look at my letter.

    Quote Originally Posted by Ildus1988 View Post
    This is a letter to my future employee.
    I want to ask him few questions. Can you fix it please.



    Dear Mr. Garrett.
    Hello Mr Garrett, how are you today?
    I'm XXXX, a student from Kazan. I had an interview with you last week at Shalyapin hotel about a vacancy in Almetevsk city. You said that will you would call me in a few days, maybe I missed your call? but I have not heard from you. I called Igor today and he said its fine with told me that everything was fine. But he couldn’t tell me starting days. And ask me to contact with you. However, he could not tell me the start date and asked me to contact you direct.

    I ‘d I would like to ask you a couple of questions:

    1. I’d like to know when I should to When would you like me to start work?

    2. I had already applied for a J1 visa before I knew about this job. And they already did All the paperwork has been completed and I’ll I am due to have an interview with the VISA visa officer in on 28 of May 28/5/10. Could I request a confirmation that I get hired and will start work at you please confirm my appointment with your company, so that I could can explain the situation to the visa officer about situation and cancel my visa application?

    3. As an alternative, as Or I already have all the documents to go to USA and have already paid all the fees, I am wondering if Maybe in XXX your company we have has some internship opportunities with internship. In this that case I could have a undergo training in at the Head office (or branch) of XXX for a few months. And In my view, this would help me to I could better understand the main work keys areas of XXXX the company workin in the head office and, after coming back to my country, I would be able to contribute more to my the job. I can use my J1 visa to for the internship.

    I looking forward to hearing from you soon. Please contact me at xxxxxxxxx

    Fatefully yours

    Feel free to contact with me at XXXXX

    Yours sincerely

    xxxxxxxxxx
    Please see my suggestions above.

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