.Please help me
andcorrect my letter.
Instead of the president of our society, I need to send
a letter likethe following letter to a doctor in Spain! (The two clauses don't seem to be related at all.)This is a kind of important one because of money-related matters and that is why I need to be careful.
Thank you very much in advance for your help!
Dear Dr. XXX,
As President of the JGXX, I would like to thank you all for
all ofyour cooperation forin our Society's activities and your offer thatof three hundred Spanish endoscopists of the SDEF would joinjoining us with membership.as members.
We are sending youPlease find attached the attachedinvoice for the JGXX International Membership (for 300 members) for the year 2010. We herebywould like to request you to send the payment to us by check or bank transfer. In addition, we would also like to request you to send us a list of each member’s name, institution and e-mail address, (no comma)for our membership informationrecord.
We will send our journal, DEN, to the Foundation at the address shown above
all at onceimmediately, as kindly offered, when your payment is received and confirmedcleared.
Then,The publisher, WB, will then contact you by e-mail shortly regarding the Society members' online access for DEN. Every issue (four issues per year) will be send sent to the Foundation , continuouslyregularly.
We hope there will be more and more active exchanges between Spainish and Japanese doctors in the future.
Your continued cooperation will be greatly appreciated.
I suggest using more space between each section and use paragraphs to make reading easier.
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