which one is correct?

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Zoe2008

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No further delay will be accepted, please stick to this schedule.

Please stick to the schedule, no further delay will be accepted.
 

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Change the comma to a full-stop and they are OK.

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Hello Zoe,
Both sentences are correct but as tedtmc suggested a period would be better than a comma or you could replace the comma with a semicolon.
 

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If that is the whole message, I would use the second. I would use the first if including the schedule.
 
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